Neighborhood spotlight video
Show an area through its places, not its people: parks, coffee, commute and what homes cost. About 1 minute to read aloud.
Hook
Thinking about living in [neighborhood]? Here's a quick tour.
The places
Describe places and things to do. Fair housing: don't describe who lives here or who it's "good for".
My favorite spot is [coffee shop / park / trail]. [What you love about it].
On weekends there's [farmers market / event / trail].
Getting around
It's about [minutes] minutes to [downtown / the highway / the train], and [walkability or bike lanes].
The homes
You'll find mostly [home types: 1950s ranches, new townhomes]. Recently, homes have sold for about [price range].
Use recent sold data and say where it's from.
Call to action
Want to see what's for sale in [neighborhood] right now? Message me. I'm [your name] with [brokerage].
Timing and structure
This script is about 84 words to say aloud: roughly 0:32 at a fast pace, 0:36 at an average pace and 0:42 if you take it slowly, in 5 parts.
| Part | Words as written | About |
|---|---|---|
| Hook | 9 | 0:04 |
| The places | 24 | 0:10 |
| Getting around | 17 | 0:07 |
| The homes | 17 | 0:07 |
| Call to action | 17 | 0:07 |
Record it in one take, or part by part with By section so you can redo one part without the rest.
Fill these in before you read
- [neighborhood]
- [coffee shop / park / trail]
- [What you love about it]
- [farmers market / event / trail]
- [minutes]
- [downtown / the highway / the train]
- [walkability or bike lanes]
- [home types: 1950s ranches, new townhomes]
- [price range]
- [your name]
- [brokerage]
Use real names, numbers and examples: specific details are what make a script sound like you rather than a template.
Delivery notes in this script
These appear on the prompter as reminders, and are never read aloud:
- Describe places and things to do. Fair housing: don't describe who lives here or who it's "good for".
- Use recent sold data and say where it's from.
Before you read it
- Lead with the price, the place or the result in the first two seconds.
- Show your name and brokerage on screen or say them: many states require the brokerage in ads.
- Describe homes and places, never who a neighborhood is “for”: fair housing rules apply to video too.
- Say where market figures come from (your MLS or board) and the month.
How to use this script
- Open it with the button above. It loads straight into the prompter, on any phone, tablet or computer.
- Replace every [bracket] with your own words. Notes in grey are for you and are never read.
- Read it aloud once, cut anything you wouldn't say, and set the speed so it ends on time.
Questions
How long does this script take to read?
About 0:36 at an average speaking pace of 140 words a minute. It's 84 words, so between 0:32 and 0:42 depending on how fast you speak.
Can I change the script?
Yes. It's free to use and change for personal or commercial use. Replace the 11 bracketed blanks with your own details, then cut or reword anything you wouldn't say.