Customer story: before, after and what changed

Tell one customer’s story in under a minute. Stories sell better than features, and they don’t feel like ads. About 1 minute to read aloud.

Hook

[Customer's first name] was [the problem they had] when they found us.

Before

Every [day / week], [what that problem looked like for them].
Use their words if they gave you permission.

What changed

We [what you did together], and within [time], [the result].

After

Now they [new situation]. In their words: "[short quote]."

Call to action

If that sounds like you, [the next step — link in bio, send a message, book a call].

Timing and structure

As written, the template is 60 words in 5 parts. Your own details go in the blanks, so the finished script is longer: it's designed to run about 1 minute, which is around 140 words at an average pace of 140 words a minute.

PartWords as writtenAbout
Hook120:05
Before110:05
What changed100:04
After90:04
Call to action180:08

Record it in one take, or part by part with By section so you can redo one part without the rest.

Fill these in before you read

Use real names, numbers and examples: specific details are what make a script sound like you rather than a template.

Delivery notes in this script

These appear on the prompter as reminders, and are never read aloud:

Before you read it

How to use this script

  1. Open it with the button above. It loads straight into the prompter, on any phone, tablet or computer.
  2. Replace every [bracket] with your own words. Notes in grey are for you and are never read.
  3. Read it aloud once, cut anything you wouldn't say, and set the speed so it ends on time.

Questions

How long does this script take to read?

It's designed to run about 1 minute once your details are in the blanks: around 140 words at an average pace. Paste your finished version into the prompter to see its exact length.

Can I change the script?

Yes. It's free to use and change for personal or commercial use. Replace the 10 bracketed blanks with your own details, then cut or reword anything you wouldn't say.

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